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Gold

Gold is such a beautiful ore
Getting it refined is quite a chore
Glad I found a place that does this
Getting a necklace will be pure bliss

Giving gold as a gift you see
Greets the day oh so happily
Guess I'll have to do this more often
Going the extra mile helps one to soften

Gripes and complaints will go away
Gradually as you smile throughout the day
Grateful arms will hug you true
Gosh, I'd like to be with you

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  • Once Upon A Mind
    May 7
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    Very Nice use of the letter G, and the word Gold Best of luck to you in the contest!


  • Kelli Marie
    April 25

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    This was a good write. The last line making it obvious that you were writing about g's. I kind of wish you would of stayed away from that. Though it is a good write. Thank you for sharing.
    Kelli
  • mcheadle
    April 24
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    Well katie my dear

    only a dirty old man would say look for the string. I know I am so bad. For shame on me. ...mac

    Your poetry tomight is better than mine, must be the fatigue getting to me and making me silly.
    • mcheadle
      April 25
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      I can't believe i wrote this

      I did leave the computer on, I did start to say something and the phone rang, I went to bed afterwards. I heard one of the fellas talking about this and just shook my head. I am so sorry. I don't lime sharing my friends with thr likes of them.. I will make sure I am shut down before leaving a gain. Now I will have to loose a piece of my mind to some joker. I couldn't understand what you were omiing of with. I had said plunk the G string and listne to music ....mac

      • Katie Lazette
        April 25
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        Mac

        Don't give it another thought. The G string bit went right over my head. I couldn't figure out what you were talking about. Have you written a poem from the alaphabet? Have a wonderful day.....Katie

    • Katie Lazette
      April 25
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      well Mac

      Get some rest and write a poem using a letter from the Alaphabet.

  • ShelleyA gold member
    April 24

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    A beautiful write. Lilting and lotsa fun. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.


  • ennovy silver member
    April 24

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    Gee-Wiz

    GLORIOUSLY GOOD GIRL, it takes an beautiful GAL like you to create a GAINT of a read. GETTING me all excited about the letter "G" This was just G-R-E-A-T
    ...smile Katie.......I loved it...novy

    GOD Bless you dear friend


    • Katie Lazette
      April 24
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      Thanks Novy for your kind comments. So glad you enjoyed my poem......Katie
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