Gold is such a beautiful ore
Getting it refined is quite a chore
Glad I found a place that does this
Getting a necklace will be pure bliss
Giving gold as a gift you see
Greets the day oh so happily
Guess I'll have to do this more often
Going the extra mile helps one to soften
Gripes and complaints will go away
Gradually as you smile throughout the day
Grateful arms will hug you true
Gosh, I'd like to be with you
A contest entry
- Pick-A-Letter by Kelli Marie.
1800 points, ended May 8, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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Very Nice use of the letter G, and the word Gold
Best of luck to you in the contest!
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This was a good write. The last line making it obvious that you were writing about g's. I kind of wish you would of stayed away from that. Though it is a good write. Thank you for sharing.
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Well katie my dear
only a dirty old man would say look for the string. I know I am so bad. For shame on me. ...mac
Your poetry tomight is better than mine, must be the fatigue getting to me and making me silly. -
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I can't believe i wrote this
I did leave the computer on, I did start to say something and the phone rang, I went to bed afterwards. I heard one of the fellas talking about this and just shook my head. I am so sorry. I don't lime sharing my friends with thr likes of them.. I will make sure I am shut down before leaving a gain. Now I will have to loose a piece of my mind to some joker. I couldn't understand what you were omiing of with. I had said plunk the G string and listne to music ....mac
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Mac
Don't give it another thought. The G string bit went right over my head. I couldn't figure out what you were talking about. Have you written a poem from the alaphabet? Have a wonderful day.....Katie
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well Mac
Get some rest and write a poem using a letter from the Alaphabet.
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A beautiful write. Lilting and lotsa fun. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.
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Thank you ShelleyA. so glad you enjoyed my poem.......Katie
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Gee-Wiz
GLORIOUSLY GOOD GIRL, it takes an beautiful GAL like you to create a GAINT of a read. GETTING me all excited about the letter "G" This was just G-R-E-A-T
...smile Katie.......I loved it...novy
GOD Bless you dear friend
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Thanks Novy for your kind comments. So glad you enjoyed my poem......Katie
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