How does the sun tell the earth of its love?
How do the heavens speak from above?
How do I tell you, when we’re apart,
that “I love you” is written in your heart?
Some things are changeless, like the moon and the tides.
Some things are known by our feelings deep inside.
What were the chances that we’d ever meet?
Together we have found the meaning of complete.
So no matter what happens, whatever fate allows
it won’t change the feelings that we’ve shared up to now.
Words are only sounds but if you listen close you’ll hear
my soul whispering to you “I love you forever, my dear.”
Author notes
Sometimes the simplest things are the hardest to express. Sometimes the simplest expressions are the easiest to understand....
Prompt: she means the world to me...
Picture Credit: Provided by Wolf Mistress
A contest entry
- Make her smile... by Wolf Mistress.
900 points, ended May 4, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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"So no matter what happens, whatever fate allows
it won’t change the feelings that we’ve shared up to now."
Your writing really speaks to me. Its so beautiful and it says so much. Thank you for all your great pieces. They are truely inspirational
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Thank you for your appreciation... If you've found anything worthwhile then I'll consider it a "successful" poem... thank you for taking the time to read and comment... it's keeps me going (LOL)...
Ken
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Wonderful job, good luck in the contest. I'll have a run for my money for certain ^_^
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So no matter what happens, whatever fate allows
it won’t change the feelings that we’ve shared up to now.
I am sure the host of the contest will like this very much.
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this was amazing...
i love the part "Some things are changeless, like the moon and the tides.
Some things are known by our feelings deep inside.
What were the chances that we’d ever meet?
Together we have found the meaning of complete."
i love the way you write
people like you inspire me to write....
this is one of my favorites..
keep up the good work..
~katelynn~
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Thank you for your kind comments... Comments like yours inspire ME to write (
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Very romantic and full of sincere down to earth romance. Good write!
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