Boredom
It puzzles me how sometimes,
I can find my life a bore,
Though many things have happened,
I'm never knowing what's in store.
So many times i've nearly died,
Though obviously i survive,
Yet i'm still bored silly,
Its for excitement that i strive!
Partner after Partner,
My relationships all end,
For simply no other reasons,
Than into boredom i descend.
I have a gorgeous puppy,
He's nearly 3 years old,
Full to the brim of energy,
Yet into boredom i am sold.
Many things throughout my life,
Have been ruined by this ill,
Yet through my life a wander,
Awaiting my one and last thrill.
Author notes
Well i don't know if this will fit your contest or if anyone can figure out what star sign i am from Boredom : )
I'm a gemini and theonly thing that i find a problem with when it comes to my personality is that gemini's a generally easily bored in all aspects of life.
It has actually ended almost all of my relationships as i tend to get very bored very quickly with the relationship.
Anyway i hope you enjoy this and that it fits your contest.
xoxo
A contest entry
- Zodiac Signs - Astrological Influence by eleni.
450 points, ended May 9, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
A very fine write. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.
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Great!
I really enjoyed this poem as it reflects your personality which is a trait from your star sign Gemini. I would have liked a bit more emphasis on the actual sign rather than just your life's experiences, but other than that I find it to be a very rewarding piece of writing. Being a Virgo, I am a bit of a perfectionist, so if it wouldn't be a hassle, could you please correct your punctuation? Thank you for joining my first contest! -
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Thanks
Thank you for the comment i'm glad you enjoyed the poem it was fun to write for your contest.
Sorry about the spelling i think i fixed all the mistakes i tend to type fast and sloppy when i get into a rhythme
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