where is the love many people ask?
the love is where you are happy most
those closest to you are your love
its that warm feeling you have toward someone
its your mother in the moring coming in to wake you up because your late for school
its your best friend with their arm around you in the tough times when you need comfort
but why is the love i feel making me feel like i'm ripping my self to shreds?
being torn by love is a painful task
this wolf has found love in the wrong eyes of studs that fight for her affection
how can someone so cunning fall into the steel trap of death?
too many fight for this lone wolf's heart
and her love for her former friends kills her to reject any one of them of their proposal.
how to pull through from being torn?
you tell me how it works,
Love is not my thing, and it's not why i exist
love has torn me close to nothing
which is what i will be soon enough because of it
the love for my friends and the pain they feel when i turn them down mirrors to me and rips me all the more inside
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Wow... I like this poem. You're telling me the emotion with memories and thought. Nicely done. Good job. Good Luck. -
Well done!
Teenage angst tore me to shreds. I still have the scars. You did an excellent job of exploring yours. This one is probably very close to your heart. Thanks for the read.
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lol glad u enjoyed it,
writing typical tennage things is what i'm for, who elsae is gonna write that sorta stuff in ur life eh mate?
i'm 17 in 3 weeks and no looking forward to it, i like just being able to mees around and b me, the real me is gona get dorwned with all the seriousness of being an adult...
hmm insperation is starting to rise...
just inspired another poem in my head... i better get writing then lol
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Love is not my thing, and it's not why i exist
love has torn me close to nothing
that was fucking EPIC! great job! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox -
this piece of writing was awesome. keep it up!
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This is a very great piece. it shows that love can be a good thing but it can also tear you apart. this was very cool. i liked it a lot!
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thnx for the comment on it
but i wrote it coz that what i'm going thro atm in my life...
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thanks for entering! this was a nice piece! I like how to related love to wolves...maybe its just because I like wolves, but I really liked that part! you did a great job! good luck
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