You come home and kiss me,
then you hand me a beautiful red rose,
but i noticed that you were late,
and you smelled like my friend Marie,
now that emotion worked up inside me... HATE,
we get into a big fight,
it turns physical and then we stop,
you slept on the couch and i slept on the bed,
next morning you asked if I slept good,
I said just great... I lied,
as the time flyed,
I startd going to the door to meet him,
then there was a knok at the door,
I opened it and lieing on the porch was a rose,
not just any rose... a bloody black rose.
A contest entry
- Five (5) Titles To Inspire by Manda Kathryn.
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Comments
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I really liked this write it just flowed so well and I felt to pain as I read it
Thanks for entering
Miss Ciara ann -
I think you have done a wonderful take on the prompt, you have several spelling errors and I suggest you fix them so the full beauty of this powerful write comes through.
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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wow thts deep
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