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For Roaddog

Roaddog's resplendent Harley Daividson
it coruscate sublime,
as he readies for his sojourn
as I pen this end line rhyme.

Off into the sunset
as we watch his silhouette
for a while he is transcending
from this mundane life of sweat.

The wind cascades across his face
and he transitions, feeling free,
he coasts along the road so fine
his true epiphany.

And as the day begins to slow
the clouds look like filigree,
behind, the sky is tangerine
it's time to stop for tea.

Tucking Harley in for the night
he starts a warming fire,
slowly picking up his calliope
with music he'll inspire.

However the incessant tones
resonate  some bland renditions
he's really not the best at this
not really a musician.

But finally the night sounds serene
as a zephyr whispers 'Wolfie?'
it's time to get your butt to sleep
or I swear you'll be debris!.

But truly Roadogg I'm just trying to
inveigle all your senses,
to congratulate you on one year here
I really don't mean no offenses

Author notes

Many thanks to Jeannie D for the wonderful border,

Wordbank - resplendent, coruscate, sublime, sojourn, sunset, transcending, mundane, cascade, transitions, epiphany, filigree, sky, tangerine, incessant, resonate, serene, zephyr, inveigle

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  • Desire gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    Oh My Word!!

    You are one Brave Poet to use the word bank
    Love this and boy You have me hollering and stomach hurting
    Love it!!


    and Magnificent rhyme too
    -rolls on the floor from the images-

    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Humor and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • dustookie2
    May 6, 2008

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    oh you have heard this roaddog sing but we are tone deaf and sing loudly off key drowning out his wailing saving him from the aggression of people carrying shotguns wearing brightly coloured earmuffs....your words be magic but this is a roast and offend we will intend to make this roaddog squirm and feel the roasting heat on his doggie rump....yes he has a way with words this dog of road with his pen dipped in ink he writes not of mundane things he sees the beauty of the natural world around us riding his Hogz wind in his face riding free following the white line of highways guiding hands...but this is a roast to burn his butt and give us all a belly laugh...so he keeps on howling to the sky echoing across the wires for all the world to hear... prodding roaddog rump seems to me the roast is all but done and what a way to end it ...breaking out the bubbly....


  • Roaddog Wolf
    May 4, 2008

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    No offenses taken

    it's all in fun, and you did a good job of tucking me in , LOL

    Thanks for the poem


  • dustookie2
    April 26, 2008
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    It was hoped that we would be judging the Roast of Roaddog Wolf on the 27th April as this is his one year on AP....Karen/Poetic Whisperer is moving house and we have not been able to contact her...yep made the hard decision to extend this till 4th May ...... sorry if it causes anyone problems...
    Thank you.
    Mook