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Trippy

Twisting, swirling, melting images
Rippling waves of patterns
Instant release on a grand journey
Pooling thoughts in a crazy mind
Peering into a different world
Yearning for the end so you can finally rest

Author notes

Soooo Tired!

What a trip!
Written December 15th, 2003

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  • perfectlyana
    April 23, 2004
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    awesome

    Wow... reminds me of that acid experience I had once. I like the acrostic form. Great poem!

    ~Sarah~


  • lovepoet
    December 16, 2003
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    Tasty!

    Always, you come up with the very best Acrostics.
    Maybe there's something in the water?
    After thinking about that though, others would also compose this well.
    Never mind,
    I'm not going
    To
    Analyze it any further.



  • In-fin-ite
    December 15, 2003
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    This kind of sums it all up very nicely off to read more...

    ~JayLynn

  • philophant
    December 15, 2003
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    bravoo...really liked this. even if you claim to be handicapped in the 'love' category, you cannot pretend to be so in the others i love the instant release thing...this reminds me very much of a poem "Imagination who can sing thy source.." anyway, great job. exellent.


  • glazecovered
    December 15, 2003
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    Trippy is like my favoritest word of all times, and I love it, and I love your poem, and I love you for writing it! *excited* Twisting, swirling, melting images...This is exactly the way it feels...The power of trippynes...*mwah*


  • erin ravenskye
    December 15, 2003
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    Muahahaha, I understand all too well miss thang...LOVE the background, very fitting. Hope your finals went well.

    ~ Erin Ravenskye

  • cyko
    December 15, 2003
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    Ah yes, trippy indeed. As much as yearn for an end though I am still caught up in the now. I wish for the end of the tripped out dillemas that have been constructed in my head. Good description of trippy.


  • Samplette gold member
    December 15, 2003
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    Very unique way to say that you are tired....a bit trippy, but definitely tired.
    You are a delight to read.
    Sam


  • Desire gold member
    December 15, 2003
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    YOU are to trippy~Love it~I am tired to and can relate~Acrostic Queen~Keep on writing and inspiring~ Great job here sweetie~Big hugs and much love~Desire


  • Tiffany
    December 14, 2003
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    I'd be tired after all that twisting and swirling too! Sounds like this could be after a night of drinkin, maybe its jusst the line
    rippling waves of patterns
    I like this though, especially that line.

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