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[Lola Emma] A poem about how afraid and sad I was..this is a confession!..

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    Aw this is sad and kind and interesting... personally, I think backgrounds make the poems... well done ^.^


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 24, 2008
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    i know this is not a great poem..but its personal....i cant change it


  • XNevermindX
    April 24, 2008

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    This has so much hidden and obvious emotion. Really sad and i really hope that what ever it is you can over come it...


  • TakenforLife
    April 24, 2008

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    This write has alot of emotion! Made me feel sad for you! I hope you over come it i really do! Remember we make ourselves who we are not by the peope we are around! Great write!