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Heaven is with you (Alphabet Acrostic)

Anywhere would be heaven
Because you would be with me
Cuddling up so close for
Everyone to see.
Forever my darling you’re in my heart
Guiding me through the pain
Holding and wanting nothing but to
Instill my happiness again.
Just wanting to hold me, I know you'll never leave
Kissing my forehead gently and
Listening to the sigh I heave.
My thoughts are always of you
No one will ever need you more
Only you could fill this emptiness
Picking me up from the floor.
Quiet moments together
Releasing all your love
Shouting children playing
Tumbling in the room above.
Undertones of the past
Very firmly rooted,
Will the sounds of this evil
Xylophone ever be muted?
You are my friend, you are my lover too
Zoned in on you forever my darling… You know that I Love You!!!!




Author notes

Again this is dedicated to Ian... I love you so much xxxxxxxxxx OH!!! and I really don't like the sound of the xylophone... it grates on my nerves which is why i added it like I did xx

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  • Topaze gold member
    April 24, 2008
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    Very well done, my best wishes in the contest.


  • iamlost gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    This is very sweet and meaningful, I love the title and how it works so well with the poem. A beautiful expression of love, this is a wonderful entry!


  • daviscth silver member
    April 24, 2008

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    What an awesome job you did with the prompt. This is very impressive! Good luck in the contest.I loved this.