Though I have been warned over and over again
I cannot help but look over in the direction
Oh a being so sweet, so very tempting..
So very bad for the soul
Yet to tempting to leave on it's own..
The image of the nights that could be filled with
The pleasure of a fire yet lite...
Being warned yet not heeding those that know better..
I just cannot seem to stop falling for the ones
That just tempt me so..
The temptation so very strong,
It is like a drug that I cannot have enough of.
A thirst that I must somehow quench..
Feeling so alive if only for that one night,
Feeling wild with someone who brings out that instinct
Of animal passion...
A lust so hot it burns the skin,
feeling it move deep within, flowing in the veins
Like a poison, a poison so willingly ingested for the sake
Of feeling such a burning passion..
Breathing in the air surrounding the heated bodies...
Smell the lust thick and heavy...
Though I have been warned over and over again
I cannot help but look over in the direction
Oh a being so sweet, so very tempting..
I am forever falling.. For a lust so strong,I cannot help but want to feel the heat..The drug that moves like a poison.. I cannot help but fall, everytime I see temptation standing so sweetly by me..
I am forever falling, so willingly..
Author notes
Title: Forever Falling
A contest entry
- Five (5) Titles To Inspire by Manda Kathryn.
450 points, ended April 26, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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What a take on Forever Falling ... I would have never expected a sensual write for it and I absolutely love this; flowing and delightful this is fantastic
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Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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lust is fun but regretable lol
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How would you know
lol. I'm just playing.. Yeah it is fun, but it only last so long too..
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The temptation so very strong,
It is like a drug that I cannot have enough of.
A thirst that I must somehow quench..
Feeling so alive if only for that one night,
Feeling wild with someone who brings out that instinct
Of animal passion...
wow what a poem... and love the pic.. good luck in your contest... love this poem..
I am forever falling.. For a lust so strong,I cannot help but want to feel the heat..The drug that moves like a poison.. I cannot help but fall, everytime I see temptation standing so sweetly by me..
I am forever falling, so willingly..
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Excellent
This write flows so well. Tells the story of no matter how hard you try not to fall into the passion it consumes you and draws you in anyway. Best of luck in the contest and keep writing.
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I'm glad that you liked this... I tried.. I've still got that writers block though..lol. But I'm really trying!! lol.
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Just do not force it. your writing flows so well, just go with it
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