This morning i looked out at the sky,
The sun was rising in colours of gold,
Pouring like honey over the land,
Warm to feel upon a cool hand.
At night time the stars were out,
They glistened with silver hues,
Black velvet sprinkled with glass,
Beauty no sky could surpass.
None of this means anything though,
Sunrise, sunfall are just times in the day,
No beauty whether old or new,
Could compare to the beauty of you.
I looked upon your beautiful face,
With tear streaked cheeks, red eyes,
Your mind is weak with depression,
I have for you only a question.
Do you think i will not love you?
I will be there for you through it all,
I wait for the day you become my wife,
My dear, my love you are my life.
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I hope your girlfriend can overcome this and from personal experience i know that having someone there is the best way to deal with depression.
I hope she finds her smile.
xoxo
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"No beauty whether old or new,
Could compare to the beauty of you."
Very lovely write
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