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Late Night Acrostic

Doubt now reigns where once was only hope.

Inside I writhe and twist in anguished pain.

Surprises tie my heart like rotted rope,

And dreams are faded out by pouring rain.

Perhaps all things have changed inside a mind;

Perhaps what was is now no longer there.

Or maybe someone wonders what they’ll find,

If only courage wells, and they can dare.

Now once upon a time their dreams were dreamed,

They seemed so real to ones so young and pure.

Might they not have been what they had seemed,

Escape then draws them in with its own lure.

Now, as time hangs heavy in the lee,

The answers that I want seem not to be.

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Just some thoughts that creep in at 1 a.m.

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  • mitchybaby
    October 8, 2008

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    This is what I say while I lie in bed at night plagued by overwhelming thoughts. Couldn't have said it better myself. I should try and write a poem like this one. Maybe my word should be Happiness, what do you think??

  • Judith Chandler
    April 24, 2008

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    I have been feeling some of that myself lately, owing to certain events, and things it seems I must accept, but I tend to have my thoughts more at around 6 a.m.

    Great write.


  • catz Moderators member
    April 24, 2008

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    I sometimes have those late night thoughts, though not too often. Usually I'm asleep easily but once we start thinking, it's hard to shut it off.

    You did a great job reflecting upon thoughts that plague our minds... late night thoughts.

    Dee


  • Ishtar
    April 24, 2008
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    You already know what I think.