Sweet Silent
Serenity
Controls Body
and Mind
As I plummet
to my Utopia
thru the Golden Stars
thru the Obsidian Skies
to finally lay
upon Crystal Clear
Perfection
Eternal
A contest entry
- ~* Meditation and Momentum *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 1, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold IX - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended June 1, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A Pic prompt, see the contest for the pic
Comments
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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oh, this is beautiful! "sweet silent serenity" nice alliteration that flows wonderfully. and "as i plummet to my Utopia" LOVE that line...I hope to see a gold trophy with this! GOOD LUCK!!!!!!
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Awakening Slumber
This piece tugged at Spirit and while I was reading...
for some reason.. I was seeing the Lotus Temple
in India...and being shown a Lotus in palm...
Also hearing words: Faith...Belief and it shall Be
Seeing Deity Ganesha~
Being shown like a carpet...magic carpet..
off the ground
Wonderful images...
These lines grabbed and pulled~
As I plummet
to my Utopia
thru the Golden Stars
thru the Obsidian Skies.
Excellent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Nice introduction of passive thinking settling my confusion of thoughts into order ..complete oneness of mind and body...this has a nice zen like feel. Brilliant take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest...i do like where your lines have taken me on this journey...thank you for the pleasure.
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I like th flow of this. It is a very pretty write.
Best of Luck
Silenced One
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