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**sigh**

i sang the sweet song of death
and it did not answer
so here i sit waiting
for a reply long in the coming
wishing to somehow free myself
break through these chains
and give myself that which is denied me
but the bonds are tight
and i can't be released
not sure what is holding me back
these restraints are invisible
so i try to carry on
in a place i'm not wanted
passing through like a ghost
on its way to a haunting
i slip in the mud, bite down on my cheek
the taste of blood is all i know
everyone rushes by me
oblivious to the lost soul under their feet
i feel me slipping away
floating towards the vastness
and i wonder where i am headed
and if my song has been answered at last

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  • Lotus-Mama
    April 26, 2008

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    Wow, this is amazing. I so know that felling- very nicely articulated!!

    "but the bonds are tight
    and i can't be released
    not sure what is holding me back
    these restraints are invisible
    so i try to carry on"

    Great job!