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Triple Nonsense

Wandering wordlessly while alone,
Suffering seafarers should atone.
In their fate they're a ghost,
They're shark-bait at the most,
Hungrily, haplessly, hewn to bone!


Allied allegories attacked on high,
Flinging fundamental funnies adry.
The observants did note,
Those three men in a boat,
Praying perfunctory persons good-bye!


While observing ossilatory osmosis,
That's admitting ambulatory atrocious.
The old man did say,
"I'ts headed this way",
And performed physiology precocious!

Author notes

Nefarious, non-sensical, nothings; written wryly, while woebegonely watching charismatic cartoons cascade, on the benignly bountiful boob-tube. SOMEBODY PLEASE SHOOT ME, I CAN'T STOP!!

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  • DeGraw
    June 30, 2008

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    Funny!

    Great alliteration! It's one of my favorite forms for free flowing funny verse! Keep up the insanity!
    Jennifer


  • whits end silver member
    April 24, 2008
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    This is written pretty cool! I really enjoyed reading it!

  • chandaliearring
    April 24, 2008
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    This was the wonderful thing that I needed today to put a smile on my face.

    In a way, it somewhat reminds me of a Lewis Carroll-esque poem, in the sense that it is beautifully nonsensical; and, yet, it makes perfect sense. The alliteration is wonderful, the sound is great. It just screams to be read aloud.

    Thank you for a great read. I thoroughly enjoyed it.


  • Master-G
    April 24, 2008

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    o i love this poem find it very amusing, puts a smile on my face! Very nicely written, great use of alliteration absolutly fantastic. has a great flow to it and i could read it again and again!


  • Griswold silver member
    April 24, 2008

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    That my friend Braz is a work of art..An alliteration strewn tongue twister to boot. Very well done, makes absolutely no sense to me at all.. Scott


  • ennovy silver member
    April 24, 2008

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    Uniquely F-U-N-N-Y

    This is just beautifully funny as can be. Had to get out the old dictionary but after looking up 2 words I was LMAO again....your to much! novy your AP wife

    I love ya!


  • Uninvited Guest
    April 24, 2008

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    i request translation please!! but i like how you did your rhyming, very well put together and a very good flow

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