Staring at the darkened sky;
Her eyes of blue in stark contrast with the black of night.
Her thoughts ride on the backs of the ravens;
As they soar through the air, near to the moon.
Not alarmed by the crashing of thunder;
Instead she welcomes it.
The rain that will surely follow will be a welcome reprieve.
It will wash away the dust of the day;
Rinse clean the night.
Tomorrow will shine bright again;
All because of the storm.
A contest entry
- Enter The Raven. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended April 27, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - all HM winners! by Cat10.
850 points, ended May 19, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thank you for entering! this was a very nice piece! you did a really, really good job! good luck in the contest!
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Thank you for your most beautifully dark entry, good luck, Josie
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Cool... Uh... And Um...
It's good. I don't really have anything special to say about it. Good job!
-Still Goin' Nuts
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Hey sweets,
OoooOh...Pretty!
The image that you give into your writing is amazing...best with you in the contest!! (believe it or not...it sounds like a very pretty and elegant gothic poem 
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Love you <3
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