They Know I like you
So they tell you
You ask Why?
No answer is clear
Why would a nice 7th grader
Like a dorky 6th grader
You say
Why? "I am not hot"
I say I dont care
You say "I am not cool"
I say there is no such thing
You agree to step forwad
To start a relationship
I step back
Thinking I am not good enough
How could someone who thinks low of himself
Make someone fear as if they are lower?
I like him but I am not pretty....
...I am not cool
So he turns to me and repeats my words
.....There is no such thing
Author notes
Everything i said here is how I felt and some of what he told my friends he felt
Well this explains how the guy first is confused on how the girl would like him but as soon as he feels that he'd want to go out with her she takes her step backwards and reviews her feeling feeling insecure and this time the boy must make her take a step forward.
SImple view of this: The guy feels insecure and when he is ready the girl feels unready to start relationship causing a short love story in which the boy must get her to believe in herself
A contest entry
- My deepest Feelings of within by Abner.
600 points, ended May 5, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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yea i love
i think its so unique, its different style
different setting but yet so unique. thanks a lot
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