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Tornado

I saw those horrifying clouds came near me

Nothing was ever the same

The dangers they bring

Are too much to tame

 

The damage done

Too much to pay

The deaths lost

Too much each day

 

The tears they bring

So very many

Theres no telling the number

But we know it's plenty

 

The fear too strong

The day seems done

But everything else

Has just begun

 

 

 

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Lilapsophobia is fear of tornadoes! OMG!

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  • Erin200
    August 18, 2008

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    Wow....Uhm, yeah. So this is really good, it's kind of like a....well I can't describe it very much but that means it's too awesome for words! No seriously, this is awesome. I wish you would be on more.

    ~Erin


  • CaramelCrazy
    July 25, 2008

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    Wow, this really speaks to everyone in a way thats not all with huge words, I mean it breaks this down very nicely. I can totally relate to it! Nice job. Glad I was able to find it and have an awsome poem to read. Keep it up, you are good!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 1, 2008

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    I can definately relate to why you would have a phobia of tornadoes as they are quite frightening and nobody really wants to be near one of them. I like the way you described this phobia though, in your own words.