From darkened depths
beneath the canopy
the heat of day; chilled.
Life’s pathway dimmed
yet, ahead a bridge
handrails to guide my steps.
Leading me onwards
into dreams of light
opening my thoughts
for tomorrow’s horizon…
Author notes
Picture linked from contest.
A contest entry
- PIF Contest (Picture Prompt) by Sgt B.
525 points, ended April 28, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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How very beautiful and so filled with the light of hope!! I really enjoyed this and it was a delightful change from the dark that I have been reading lately.
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wonderful
very descriptive and well express. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wow, very inspirational! Something that we all relate to - a journey. The use of the image is beautiful, as well as the words you've penned (or typed..). Great work as per usual!
And not sure if you remember - I used to be Red Satan. Havnt been on for quite some time, and now i'm seeing what I've been missing. Drop by and say Hi if you remember (Ive got to figure out how to do teh little pictures again!)
Much love
Kas
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Just Beautiful
This is just beautiful. What an excellent poem with fabulous imagery for the photo. Sounds like a nice journey to me.
into dreams of light
opening my thoughts
for tomorrow's horizon
Wonderful light hearted poem. Thank you for sharing.
Much Love
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Thank you for your entry, Good luck
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Wish I had written this. smile. A sensitive take on the picture. Loved every word.
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Brilliant! This is a perfect take on the picture prompt. You really nailed it beautifully with your talented pen. Well done! Best of luck in the contest.
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Excellent
What a wonderful creation for the picture. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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