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holding hands

cradled beneath branches
grabbing at leaves
flying through forever
forgetting everything

intertwined as cables
running from my open door
finding ourselves in freedom
crawling up the sandy shore

your eyes the looking glass
to my future and my past
as for the present
it has come in last

this life is insignificant
but you make it worth while
hearing your voice at night
renders my heart to be wild

the fear i store to say this
is oh so complicated
i cannot bare to tell you
lest my soul become gated

let's hold hands please
and walk to a distant place
for you make me smile so much
it almost hurts my face

we are just silly
and i know that it's true
i can't live without us
and neither can you

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    May 14

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    awesome^23048927304837

    I think we should totally start using this thing again.
    And, when i get my driver's license next week, I'm totally coming to see you!