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Freedom

Finally free
from sadness
of debt
and illness

Finally free
from pain
of hate
and love

Finally free
from my prison
of body
and mind

Finally free
from all
but one

        This cold
                    black
                              tree

A contest entry

A Pic prompt, see the contest for the pic

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  • nichtmich silver member
    April 24, 2008

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    Whew! One cannot escape everything! Dark and sorrowful, an apt take on the prompt. Best wishes in the contest.


  • Tattboyspet
    April 24, 2008

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    Freedom can definitely be brought about in many simpler ways ... personally, I think this sort of thing is the coward's way out ~shrug~
    lol, but you have told me a reason why this picture could be there, so thank you for your entry