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My Nightly Travels

Against your chest
beating
I drift
slowly sinking
into that resonating drum

In another world
so beautiful
I fall
with the speed
of a racing tortise
and warmth evelopes my senses

A giant page
from our lives
becomes my dance floor
magical
and images
like holograms
appear before me
reflecting
story telling
as I twirl amongst the print
so serene

And with a jerk
and snore
I am pulled back
back to my bed
where I sleep
loved
loving
against your chest


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  • PsydewaysTears gold member
    May 26, 2008
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    the fave game

    the final stanza, the flow overwhelms


  • RunningFree
    May 8, 2008

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    Touching

    I love the vivid description of sleeping on a lover's chest. The last stanza made me smile. You express a lot within the short lines. Thank you for entering this into my contest.