what was it you said,
not so long ago...
something about 'never'
well let me tell you,
I have not found the
end of 'never' yet.
it continues on and on
going on forever,
never is never,
and never is fun,
when it is you
I think of.
when I think of
'never' and the
meaning you gave,
I have to say,
I feel all warm
and happy inside.
your 'never'
so much better
than the one
I ever knew...
I'll take your 'never'
and keep it forever.
it's never and forever
for you and me...
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
Excellent. you really captured the meaning of "never". He said never and you are holding him to it. Wonderful write.
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I like the repetitive wording of never held within this one catchy beat, and great meaning,
well done poet well done.
Blessings,
Frozentearz -
A beautiful write...
Such a great poem you've penned here Sunshinegirl. I enjoyed feasting my eyes from the first to the last syllable you've breathed to the paper, through you pen. Thanks a lot for sharing...Shalom
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Thanks my friend. The more of mine you read, you will come to learn, I write from the heart, and several of them, the meaning is vague to most, but a few will pick up on instantly. Like this one, there is a much deeper meaning to other than what you read.
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Excellent
Such a great poem you have written. gives so many touching feelings. Thank you for sharing.
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats sooo sweet lol... i like this poem... i was reading your story you got on line and it sounds really really good... hugs..... keep on writing cause i love reading.... and your just to dang good...to stop.....
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Which one? I have two going on storywrite..
one is fiction, one is fact with names chaged
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Precious!!
Beautiful piece You have penned Sweet One and Love the energy also the images You have versed
Border is Gorgeous too
never is never,
and never is fun,
when it is you
I think of.
Love these lines~~
Wooooooooooo Hooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Oddly, when I read the term of "never" I think of it more than a negative situation I know it is a love poem, but I found that it had more of a "I'll never be with you" type of feel. That's just my view on the usage of it. XD
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Well, Little One,
I guess that all would depend on the way you look at it...
I use to look at like you, then I was told something very different, and well like that a lot better so I keep that one close to me everyday and go with that.
Love ya
Mom
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never and forever...I love this sis. You Never cease to amaze me!
love ya
Michelle
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Thanks Sis.
You read this perfectly! Thank you! Some are taking a different way
Love ya
Nyetta
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never is truly forever. you write beautifully
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i like it
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thanks, got this idea from a free write
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This is very well penned. Its a little rough in parts. But I may just be picky. You need to captilize you i's though in my opinion, just one of my pet peeves
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