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or maybe that's you.

my mouth is against your tan shoulder. your skin is so warm, even in this dark night where the cold seems to settle upon us like a heavy blanket, sending shivers up my spine.

or maybe that's you.


i'm breathing slowly, pretending to be asleep on top of you, just the way you like it. and i know you're singing that song just for me. you think i can't hear you. and your fingers are running through my hair like you can never get tired of the way it feels. and your breath is soft on my ear.


a thousand rainbow stars are erupting overhead and i'm missing the fireworks show that the heavens are playing for you and me, only so i can hear you sing to the beat of your heart in that soft voice that nobody knew existed but me. i might just melt into a puddle right here on your chest;

your voice is like honey, golden and smooth.



i could lay here forever, your lullaby rocking me to sleep on its wispy arms made of clouds and kisses. i can feel your fingers brushing my face and i know you're counting the freckles on my nose, etching into your memory the way i look when i'm asleep.



and the very earth seems to be swaying along; the grass is moving against my limp fingers. i can't wait any longer. my eyes open, and you seem surprised and embarrassed. you didn't know that i knew you can sing, and you thought that i didn't know the lullaby you wrote for me, the one thing that can make me peaceful enough to fall asleep beneath the stars.


or maybe that's you.

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  • country-girl
    November 16, 2008

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    oh my goodness, this was so sweet and romantic!!! i loved it!! i like how it was romantic without being dirty or erotic. when i started reading it, i wasn't sure where it was going, but i loved how it ended, and how you made it so sweet and beautiful. it just goes to show you that love and romance doesn't always have to be impure. this poem was great!

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    The only thing constructively I can say is that there are a lot of 'you's' in the piece, maybe revising some lines you could remove a few?

    Your third paragraph and the final one really were the strongest. The images were quite clear and the emotion very well done.