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A Rose Is A Rose...

Every moment of the perfect love we shared
all the hopes, the dreams, the feelings and the fears
the knowing of just how deep the other cared.

It’s true I still love you after all these years
but it isn’t something I need to explain
how I love, hope and feel your heart and soul hears.

My heart still knows when you’re happy or in pain
because our love continues to radiate
and one day that love will emerge from the rain.

Your tender love is worth each second I wait
my soul and your heart are an eternal flame
illuminating a path destined by fate.

Just as a rose is a rose by any name
my love for you forever remains the same.

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  • ForeverLastingComa
    April 26, 2008

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    This is a very sweet poem =) it flowed really well and it gowes along with my contest just right =) my favorite lines were

    "My heart still knows when you’re happy or in pain
    because our love continues to radiate
    and one day that love will emerge from the rain.

    Your tender love is worth each second I wait
    my soul and your heart are an eternal flame
    illuminating a path destined by fate."

    thank you for entering and good luck =)

    ~*ForeverLastingComa aka Leesha*~


  • Metaphorist
    April 25, 2008

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    Beautiful. The ending in particular is so touching. One concern: line 6 "and soul hears"- I feel there is a word missing, maybe "my" or "what" before "soul"? Anyway, thanks for entering and best of luck!


  • Butterfly24
    April 24, 2008
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    true love is the best thing that can happen to someone... i understand the felling,,, i see my mom and dad share this feeling and they don't have to say a world to each other... but they both know how much they love each other in the same way.. wonderful write keep up the good work..