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Secret Love



In the deepness of the night
Waits her love and delight
She has a secret love
And she is heaven sent from above

A journey is taken on a cool evening
Hear her hum a song, hear her heart sing
As her love of the dark awaits her
For her love to become astir

Soft touch of the gravestone rest
She cleaves unto it upon her chest
Close to the ground she lay
And whispers sweet words of come what may

Dirt is upon her hands
With the clay and sand
The touch of his skin, so cold, so sweet
As each touch her desire feeds

Lips so still of a kiss
Intrigue her in bliss
She escapes from herself and glides into the beyond
The love continues inside her until early light of dawn

Once again she places him back into the soft earth
Preparing him for the next nights rebirth
One more kiss to wish goodbye
Till the next passion arrives in the night

They say she has a secret love
And she is heaven sent from above
She lives a different life instead
Having a love for the dead

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  • The-punk-princess
    November 19, 2008
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    I like this. it's so dark.....


  • XXAgedWithDespairXx
    August 28, 2008
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    Holy crap! this is the best poem I have read on this sight.
    A most excellent write!


  • Hihamburger
    May 6, 2008
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    Hey great poem that you have here.

  • A very unique piece indeed. Creative. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!


  • Lowell Poe
    May 2, 2008

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    WOW.
    This is a wild piece.
    It comes in on many angels....including peripheral.
    In my humble opinion, it has a dark vampire feel to me,
    yet it has a magic beauty.

    Fascinating piece,
    LOWELL POE.


  • xXMizzPopularXx
    April 25, 2008

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    I like this :]] it was very sweet great write keep it up *high five*

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