At a Halloween dance waiting for someone
to come out of hiding in the shadows.
She came out, sitting down in a chair, not very happy,
then her Love came out to ask her to dance.
She got up and said yes, so surprised.
With a smile on her face,
and his hand around her waist,
she cried, for she was happy
to have him with her and no on else.
He did not know he was so special.
He did not know he was loved
until that Halloween dance with her.
Author notes
This really did happen by the way.
A contest entry
- love poems {750 points for gold} by risewiththesmoke.
1000 points, ended April 23, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2008 Allpoetry Halloween Bash by Little Eagle.
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Thanks for your entry
Aww, this is so sweet. A new perspective of Halloween. I think we all would like for something like this to happen. I know I wish it had happened to me on one of my school dances lol.
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Happy Halloween and God Bless
Tammy
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sweet
thanks for entering
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