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dad the jerk

do you even care,
making me cry
each night I dare
to talk to you.
I really try
staying calm and not yelling,
but your selfish
always forgetting about me,
to busy worrying about devanie.
I love you but you don't care about me,
and it hurts when you talk about her
like you always do infront of me.

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my dad is a real jerk he doesn't care about me so I wrote this

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  • peridotPixi
    August 13, 2008
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    i think this poem expresses a lot of your pain and feelings you have about your dad, i hope that things will adventually work out with you guys, im sure this situation isnt the best for either of you and it may take a while for him to relize it, keep your head up
    Keep writing
    ɛiɜ ~Amy


  • She burns
    April 23, 2008

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    Oh the pain, I'm sorry to hear that, it's really hard sometimes for us when our parents never listen...