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march 15th

Wrapped so tight.
strong arms,
its so right.
so warm.

smile on my face,
not wanting to move.
relaxed with him,
on a wooden staircase.

that day
was so great.
we hugged,
we were happy.

he is my bf.
he is so sweet.
a friend to talk,
with many laughs.

I love him!!!!

Author notes

this is a poem about me and my boyfriend we got together on march 15th so I made a little poem about it.

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  • peridotPixi
    August 13, 2008

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    this poem is really cute and i love the description of the young love you have used here, so simple, wrapped in his arms on a wooden staircase, you just feel like nothing will ever go bad, that is the way love should be
    Keep writing
    ɛiɜ ~Amy


  • She burns
    April 23, 2008

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    Awwww this is so beautiful, so sweet and very loving oh butterflies I wish you guys happiness!!!!