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Jon: Part 2

Jon you worthless bastard
I hope you rot in hell
You left me broken and sad
I CRIED FOR YOU! I actually wasted energy to weep
You got what you deserved and now I have no remorse
You can say what you will, weave lies and deceit
But know that you can never have everything
You are nothing to me and never will be again
Your call me names and dry your tears of laughter with whores rags
But I still walk by and stare you in the eyes!
Yet, don't get me wrong, I will have the satisfaction of bleeding you dry
I hope to God someone has pity on a little shit like you
Because I will not
You good for nothing bitch

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  • Kimmehh
    May 22

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    JESUS!!!!! sounds like he did you wrong hun. do you need me to kick his ass??? you know i will.

    good heart.
    good punctuation.
    keep it up hun.

    love ya kimmie


  • Kimmehh
    May 3, 2008
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    dude.... what happened....?


  • ckwriter69
    April 24, 2008

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    Wow lots of anger in this write. It always helps to get it out and you've done that. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.