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~* Creationsfromheart *~

 

 

 

 

 


Across miles of wilderness and vast plains voiced
through caw and coo from birds in flight.
                                                                           

I witness a metamorphosis amidst the horizon
with hands extended from opening in clouds.



     It was said, the Divine drenched Earth's soil
     in tears to bring Life within lungs
     so Sacred song can be carried, given to another
     who may have lost will to sing.

I've been Blessed with what you have unearthed
through words on AP's papyrus, ink spilled
from quill in quiet of psalm;

enlightening those in transition, who seek change
and cry for help to be heard~
your ears perk.

Naturally with motherly instinct, I've seen you take
to the Heavens with energy and Empowerment.
Display reasons to Live, Love and admire Life
while tiny hands clutch their Bibles, hang on to every
word of Wisdom you speak on Sundays.

Children cherish your time, value the Light
that shines from Compassionate gems, a greeting
cleanses them when they look up to you and believe
God sent you to nurture with meaning of Salvation
in hand which He handed details of Gift in yours.

You don't give up on others who may have tossed in towel
but Inspire, allow intuition to blanket with Creationsfromheart.

The bread crumbs feed many from all walks of Life~

Humility hears when others opt to ignore sign language
and focus on what is in it for them;
I've seen you plant seeds so no one starves while on Journey.
Noticed name Susan as caregiver who delivers Spiritual
Soup for the Soul,
like loved ones before you had done.



May your day of birth bring Blessings like you have brought
to those who have crossed your path.







Author notes

Much Love also Light
Your way and everyday Susan~

May You continue to Bless the masses!
Thank You for befriending my other half
and me with Your Generosity-
enriching his Life also mine.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    Congrats on the gold!!

    What a beautiful thing to write for someone on their birthday, such lovely warm thoughts. Nice people have remembered (think every ones forgotten mine ) A gorgeous poem so deserving of the gold, bravo!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 25, 2008
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    A Beautiful Composition and a beautiful tribute to Susan as well--Well-deserving of the Gold!!

  • Liquid memories
    April 25, 2008

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    such deep words of inner feelings you have expressed, for the sake of another that becomes one year older. time and life caress each as it moves relentlessly onward, whether we are ready or not. swept along in the depth of life, as time and unforeseen occurences befall each one of us. life is such a beautiful gift from the Creator, we should cherish this gift, for nothing is more precious. thank you for sharing your feelings of heart.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    Oh beautiful desire, this is a wonderful and warm birthday poem! More than a poem, it's a gift. You are a gift to all those who have the luck to have you as friend

    I wish a lovely birthday to creationsfromheart. May she be blessed with all happiness, always


  • Amera gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    This is truly wonderful and you couldn't have written for a more deserving and beautiful person and author. I see bu Susan's comment that you touched her heart. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • creationsfromheart
    April 24, 2008

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    Desire all of the entries have been wonderful and beautiful, and wel yours, has made me have tears, not tears of saddness though , tears of gladness I suppose, I love thispoem and it means so much to me, for the books I write for the children are my true love and I can only pray I make a differance in their lives some how. Desire you have truly found the me inside the me. Your gift is shining through this poetic write, and your lights bright, I have been struggling with completing one of the children books, and just a few minutes ago I went to work on i t again, and I ended up editing, but not a new story, yet. and I am past my dead line... But some how some way, I do not even care that they are bugging me about getting this book to print. I signed a contract and have to follow through, and I shall, but I honestly do not think the book I am working on now and been struggling with for so long is ment for them! Not that company... You just reminded me of why I started writing to begin with, it was not for the money it was to make a change, to make a differance even if it was to touch only one Child, there for , I just made my decision. They will take the other stories, that was written under their guide lines, and this one will go to print, and given to a Church that I know so needs the books, as they can not afford to purchase them from the company... When I first started writing for them they were reasonable in price and seemed fair and over the years, 10 now, I realize they are not in it for the same reason as I... Well any ways! Sorry to go on, just this write ! Is amazing and now I know my decision is correct and I will follow my Heart again, and do it for the very reason I began! You will never know how much this write means to me!!! I will cherrish this always and forever! I love the write and thank you for sharing your gift with me! Sleep with angels


    • Desire gold member
      April 24, 2008
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      and I am elated You understand what I have written and it does bring forth a smile

      I had told penman I was waiting for a message to come from Divinity and then I would pen I'm Happy it came before Your Birthday~

      All I could see for the longest time were childrens faces
      some with tears and some with look of need and told You held many answers to their prayers~
      there are parents who may not have the time for them...but You make the time...
      Your words soothe their cries
      It was interesting for I kept hearing: keystone...and shown DaVinci Code...
      but reference to written words in this Keystone...to find The Holy Grail
      yet a metaphor for The Holy Grail...

      which lives within Spirit~
      if that makes any sense

      Thankies so much~ this made my day
      Best wishes and much Success in ALL You do


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 23, 2008

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    This is SO you! Just a beautifully wrapped present presented in prose. You heart and deep caring shines brightly in this offering. Beautifully done!


  • StarEyes
    April 23, 2008

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    Oh my goodness! What a gorgeous Birthday read this one is!! I am sure she is going to treasure this one for many years too come!

    Best of luck to you in this contest, Beautiful!

    and love

    Nettie


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 23, 2008

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    Beautiful beautiful This is very nice and i am sure she appreciates it very much. Very true too. I don't know how well you know her but this is very well written of her.

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