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passions tale...Adults only!!!

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The red Queen waits
in her chambers,
she waits for me,
I am her prize tonight.
She chose me
to be her mate .
I accept and go to her.

I take her in my arms
kissing her sweet soft lips,
her tongue darts into my mouth
as my hands pull her close.
She pushes me away and tears at my shirt,
buttons fly in all directions,
as she rips it from my chest.
her hands explore my body,
her lips kiss my nipples.
I feel her nails on my stomach,
I swallow hard and blood pumps southward.
she unbuttons my trousers pushing me onto the bed,
removing my pants she straddles me
grinding her hips, slowly against mine.
My hands now explore her body,
stripping away her clothes,
untying soft knotted strings,
leaving her body naked and exposed.
She takes my hands and places them on her breasts,
she massages herself with my willing fingers
feeling her own body quiver under my touch.
She moves her body upwards and offers herself
to my waiting mouth, my tongue plays lovers games
as she gyrates over my face, slowly at first
then faster with the rhythms of love.
Moaning gently she pulls away
and allows me to sit, taking me in hand,
she guides me inside of her, and smiles.
We kiss passionately as our lovers night continues
her dancing in my lap and me, watching her every move.
She was magnificent, bucking and moaning with my every thrust
Faster and faster we moved in total harmony.
Her lips met mine as we both cried into the night
we shared each others love, and fell back onto the bed.
I looked to her and she kissed me one last time then left.

Author notes

this is what I want you to do. write an erotic poem inspired by the picture prompt.
there is no line limit at all.

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    Now that was just as hot as can be! MMMM...I enjoyed that a bit too much! Very worthy of a trophy! So filled with passion and sweetest desire. I cannot believe I have not read you before now...LOL!

    Blessings~
    Az


  • jcat gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    Even the master of her own domaine had to blush on this one.....What an incredible hot fantasy...an aggressive woman as such is a power to be reckoned with! Thank you for sharing your fantasy


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    *hides eyes*
    Bro.. well.. er... lol
    Very erotic indeed!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    WOW!!!

    Wowzer..in triplicate! You have done a saucy job my friend, a superb steamy piece of passion. All the best in the contest with it


  • Maeve in the Night
    April 24, 2008

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    wheres the shower when you need it...well done.. and dont start complaining about how I hsouldn't have read this.Blah blah..lol. I did alreayd so there, and now that thats over with..
    This was really really good.. You have a great imagination.. I wouldn't have gotten all that out of that picture..lol. well don't, best of luck to you as well..

    Maeve

  • Nighttime angel
    April 23, 2008

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    WOW.. this is a steamy poem and I loved it..all of it
    this is very hot & very erotic. You are full of passion,
    desire. I really enjoyed this for many reasons and I am sure that you know why.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • Angel Wings1960
    April 23, 2008
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    You got my vote

    This is what I was hoping someone would write. Erotic is flowing,alond with other things. Good Luck


  • Angels hero
    April 23, 2008
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    Wow

    This is an outstandig write I like your use of words.


  • movedon
    April 23, 2008

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    Wowwwwwwwww! I got sweaty just reading it! You did such a beautiful job! Loved it!

    Always your angel,
    Miley


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 23, 2008

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    Sex slave WOW ! hot burning lust alluring !
    Sure paints an image Bro!
    Yet there is a softness later on that is rather touching.
    your sis xxx


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    April 23, 2008

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    Oi. Hot.

    LOL should have waited til after work to read this, not before I left. I will know for next time
    This is a delectable write...hmmmm must come back to read this again properly

    Brilliant, best of luck in the contest.

    Natasha

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