The day i met you,i fell for you
when i found out it was mutual,i didn't think it was true.
now that your gone,your running through my mind
I would have told you sooner,if i would have known we were running out of time.
Now nobody will help us even get to talk
and it hurts me to pass by the places we walked.
I still have the messege you sent that said" I LoveYou"
and i am sorry i never told you that i loved you too.
all i want is a chance to tell you how i feel
and i think that this time my feeling are real
I don't want to see you hurt again
and it makes me proud to be able to be called your girlfriend.
I will try to help you through all of your pain
because the thought of never seeing you drives me insane.
I know many people make you feel like they don't care
but my promise to you is that i will always be there.
Author notes
Well my boyfriend got locked up on charges he didn't do. some of them he did,but others a kid put on him. i found out the other day if he gets charged with everything they want him to be charged with he will be in JDC till 18 and then prison till 23. This really hurts,i love him so much and nobody will help him.they think he is bad but he really isn't i can help him but nobody will give me a chance.i can't even go see him.
What did you think
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Heartbreaking
I'm so sorry that you are going through the hurt of watching someone you love go through so much pain.
The expression of emotion within your poem is very raw. It is a little distracting that sometimes you use a lower case 'i' and sometimes an upper case 'I'. Other than that, a very powerful piece of free verse poetry. Thank you for entering this in my contest. -
I'm so sorry you are going through this.
Your love for this person shines through this poem. It is so heartfelt and emotional. You should show him this so he can see how much you love him and will be there for him.
Very touching write!
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I am sorry for all your pain and troubles. A very heartfelt write.
I wish I had the power make him not have to go away from you...I know I would hate that.
Your in my prayers
Cin
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