Hey there little boy,
Come to my house,
I'll put you to work,
Cleaning about.
Her put this on,
I'll grab my polaroid,
Take a few pictures,
Then slit your damn throat.
I'll carry you little boy,
As your body bleeds the blood,
Throw you in the tub little boy,
Let the acid eat you up.
Dispose of the sludge,
Get rid of the clues,
Oh little boy,
There will be many more like you.
Author notes
Been reading a book on serial killers =]. Always great.
Manson--♥--
A contest entry
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There's no Manson in the author's notes...-sighs- Oh well..
Yes, reading about serial killers is a hobby to me.
Great imagery; now I wanna kill little boys...xD
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Never heard a poem quite like this! I always watch movies and show with that kind of content. You did a pretty damn good job. It was amazingly brilliant. Well done.
Sammie xxx -
Reminds me of the poetry I wrote after I started getting into Stephen King. Very well done, by the way. It's got a really nice flow to it that effectively compliments the sinister content. I particularly like the repetition of the words "little boy". It makes the speaker seem somewhat touched to the head (i.e. demented, maniacal, etc.)
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Awesome.
This was a really great poem sis.
As I've told you before, you're a very great "poetess". Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading.
Love yew!♥
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oh, yeah, those are really good for you to read. JK, but if you start having nightmares, I am taking away your book privelages.
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