Okay man, here's the deal
I've got to get this one for real
He stepped on all my toes
He's got it coming, don't you know.
Where's he at; where he be,
I found this long poem hehehehe
It's at least an hour long,
He can hear it through the phone.
Watch him squirm and get insane,
hahaha the poem's now in pain.
He seems to be spitting it up;
litterally, now he's got the hiccups.
Man, this was fun, fulfilling and thrilling.
That guy for a long time will be chilling.
I see him now rearranging his whole life,
He said.."total makeover, or give me the knife"
A contest entry
- CRIME AND PUNISHMENT ... A funny take on punishment by Melodies.
600 points, ended April 30, 2008, 12 entries
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this is funny
and scary too. The poor bloody bloke, with all that to put up with. Well written, good rhyme, flowing rhythm...yes, I like it.
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Thank you so kindly
lol
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HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I honestly did laugh out loud while I read this poem.
I LOVE IT SO MUCH. 
Sheeesh... this contest is gonna kill me. 
Laughing and laughing...
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Melodies, hahaha you're a riotlol you'll do fine with the contest, hahaha you're a trooperlol
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Haha, this is really great! I enjoyed reading this very much!
Thanks for commenting on mine also!
Keep on writing!
Annie
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Thank you, Annie
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LOL. This is a wonderfully funny poem!! The imagery is awesome as well. Good luck in this contest. I like it a lot.
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Thanks, hahaaha
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