Your words make my ears bleed
this is not what I need
your poetry really stinks
I don't know how you think
this is torture to me
so please please stop reading
I can't take it anymore
I am about to fall asleep
Author notes
I like poetry this is for fun
A contest entry
- CRIME AND PUNISHMENT ... A funny take on punishment by Melodies.
600 points, ended April 30, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest but don't be mean
Comments
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Oh, this poem is so darling and so much fun to read. lol on bleeding ears.
Listen, some poetry does almost make our ears bleeeeeed, but not yours. 
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Well if your ears are bleeding you might want to go get that looked at hehe this is great darling goodluck in the contest much love
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Heheheheheh
lol,
Such a funny darling poem
Great imagination and let's face the fact...
Sometimes poetry can torture our ears
When I write, I ofen want to hide...
My words drving others
Like me
Wish you the best in the contest
Much love
Many blessings
Uncle David
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Well I will make sure nit to write anything to cause your ears to bleed. Good luck to you in the contest.
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This is really funny, I like it very much, it's a great contribution to this contest.
You have a typo in the third line, it's "poetry" not "poerty"
Thanks for sharing!
Keep on writing!
Annie
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I love you this is great! Good luck
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Amazing sweetheart! I'd give this poem first prize if I were running this contest. A crime and punishment write for sure. Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Brian -
this is amazingly written bab gurl with such depth and feeling you have certainly created a masterpiece with your words. I love you well done
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lol, ya know, in some contimplation I have to say while mine was about what occures to make the torture happen...
You easily captured what exactly what would be running through their minds XD
good luck,
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