Listen closely convicts
you're here because you lie...
You break the rules, this so you choose
this punishment of mine...
You may have noticed something,
different from the norm,
I speak in rhymes, for violent times
my voice echoes through your dorms!
I recite for you my child's work
he wrote it for you all...
So you may change your lawless ways
and leave here walking tall.
He named it..."My Ducky's smarter than you!!!"
"One day ducky went to school
and found he had been breaking rules,
he turned around and picked up tools
and called it...THE ELECTRIC CHAIR!!!
Ducky knew he would meet pain
if punishment he did refrain
he took upon his evil self
to cleanse his soul of all the evil things he had done without realizing!!!"
Ah, I see my plan is good
you all cringe inside your seats,
so here's part two of torture school
and what results will we now meet?
"...Ducky knew that he had wronged
so he began to sing a song
to let the world know he knew his place
he strapped himself to an INJECTION SEAT!!!"
I know you all would love
to be strapped into those chairs,
but these are nicer, more comfortable,
and the torture you can't bear.
Why let you die so quickly?
Why not live a while more,
my son's a published poet
and this is but 1 of 44!!!
Author notes
So I have this huge fascination with small children being the root of everything evil, thus is why the overwhelming pain of torture comes from a child writing about his Ducky killing itself.
I would have made this a MUCH longer poem but alas I lost my train of thought and was nearing the point where i would screw it up, so this is my work, and I hope it does the contest justice.
A contest entry
- CRIME AND PUNISHMENT ... A funny take on punishment by Melodies.
600 points, ended April 30, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems for Torture by Melodies.
650 points, ended December 12, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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HAHA!!! WOW!!! You have again captured me and held me prisoner by your torturous talent that takes me and flings me around and stomps on my brain and makes me think (know) you are brilliant!
I think I cannot clap again as I have already done so, but I will send you some fake claps: 
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hAHAHA amazing <3 i loved everyword of it!!! write again!! i will hopefully soon have a contest of my own, hopefullly you will join!
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Haha, thanks.
I write all the time really, whenever there is a good contest to put my work too...
So definetly if you got a contest let me know and I will do my best to enter.
And again, thank you for the comment.
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Oh, I do wish.... I do I do I do
Oh, I wish you could have heard me laughing as I read this poem. 
This is so FUNNNNNY! 
Oh, no kidding this is just hilarious! 
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nice :-D very twisted, but in a good way.
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I like your poem have a nice day
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Freaking scary. I've always been infatuated with the nature of children, how one could twist their beautifully innocent nature to be so evil, ala "F.E.A.R.". I think you've done a wondrous job manipulating the very naiveness of a child and turning it into putrid evil.
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wow this is brilliant, i see i have tough competition in this contest,
thanks for sharing!
good luck and keep on writing!
annie
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