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Death of my Soul

Its Black
Its Cold
Its full of holes.
The warmth that it used to hold
died with the times of old.
So I wait for the freight to take
my soul.
But instead i see just a white face.
It has no skin, its closing in.
I panic, i try to move,
but my bodie wont.
The figure wispers in my ear,
that i should be scared,
that my time is here,
and the place im going is well worse than here.

  Gregory

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  • hauntedrose15
    April 23, 2008
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    oh.my.god.

    awesome...i love that i can relate to like every word u said...
    that is deep