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Unexpected

With tenderness I'll lead her to my heart
And hold her passion in my warm embrace
The song of love that only she can start
When first I hold her in our secret place

I'll woo her with my voice inside her head
As she is found inside the words I write
Such beauty as I take with me to bed
To fill my dreams of loving through the night

For love is found where it was never sought
And blossoms in the most unlikely soil
It grows where lesser feelings will fall short
And forms a balm against the hardest toil

The love I found when I was just at play
Is now a love that warms my every day

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  • This is was absolutely beautiful. Thanks for sharing such a heartfelt piece, I can ride these emotions hard and enjoy them. Loved it.

    Love you
    Tory

  • Flamecaster
    April 23

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    Excellent....love falls when it was never sought from the man up above...may you always be happy...good luck


  • DLC-Jem
    April 23
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    Another sizzling sonnet from my poet, again you send me to bed all a shiver

    xxx Jem


  • pinkink
    April 23
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    Three cheers, this was a very lovely write, penned with true feeling.


  • moonbumps silver member
    April 23
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    This is a lovely sonnet-perfect.
    Just don't let your head get too big!
    xxx Hilly
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