Breaking apart without him here
His silence causes so much fear
For so long I watched him suffer
Forced to stand aside, nothing I could do
Slowly consuming his body
The illness eating him away
He struggles with the fight
Not sure if he should try
When all he wants to do
Is make himself feel better
I’d give anything to have him back
And to dance with him again
But I was forced to watch him die
And in it my hands were tied
I guess reality is
No matter how many tears I cry
I’ll never bring him home…
Author notes
i miss you travis...
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awwww sorry you are feeling this
TAsha
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oh sweetheart i know the pain will be awful. just know i'm always here if you need any hugsxxx
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aww i love it i had a bf names travis too he dies thats weird
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awww. so sweet. And so sincere. It really stresses how much ya miss travis
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Aww
I'm sorry Ash. I had 2 very close friends of mine commit suicide when I was 14 and it was rough. i saw them going downhil but I never relized how far until It was too late. I dont know if this is what your talking about in your poem but Its what it makes me think of. it was beatifully written.
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this is a powerful and heart breaking piece as it speaks with such depth and emotion and tugged at my heart.
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Oh my...
This is so heartbreaking.. especially that last line. It tugged at the strings of my heart. You have a way with writing our your feelings, sweets... Your words are so touching. I love you, dearest niece.
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