I see something interesting
from behind this fence,
something looking back at me,
with binoculars the view is immense.
Directly on the other side,
though, the fence is in my way,
I think that it's an animal,
it looks like it wants to play.
I smile and look once more,
this a scene I can't ignore.
A contest entry
- What is she looking at? by Jbthemilker.
475 points, ended April 27, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Honorable winner
Thank you for entering my contest. It is a joy to be able to inspire poets to write. I have started a new contest. I hope you will enter this new picture prompt.
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Nice little rhyming poem. I hope we all find out what she is looking at. I'm thinking she might be looking at a deer.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheryl
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