You stare at me, and through the look on your face
I can tell exactly what you're thinking about -
How disgusting, immoral, and unholy I am.
Please, feel free to stop me if I'm wrong.
You think that you should do us all a favor
And send me soemwhere that I can learn
The "right" way to live and love.
You know, the way He intended it to be.
Well, excuse me, but I don't think He
Would have made me this way if He
Didn't think it was okay.
Doesn't he forgive everyone anyway?
I should be just as disgusted by you as you are by me.
But instead I'll just walk away
And go where I won't be judged for being gay.
Please tell me what you think
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I really like ya writing and i think
you could go really far with it
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WHOAH BABY! THIS GAVE MY GOOSEBUMPS! Excellent poem Sonya, I'm still shivering. Probably one of your best.. Great job.
<3Kate -
I actually really like this, even though I hate what it's about. It's very well written and flows nicely. Stay strong, and nice work.
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hmmmmmmmm...i like it, but i'm not sure why. it's really really really well written, but it's disturbing. prolly cuz people actully think like this...
anywho, i love you!
<3julia
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same thing as what Mia said I love the poem but hate how people are like this
but amazing job sweetie
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I love this and I hate this.
Great job.
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