You saved my life once,
I was to scared to say I love you,
Then my heart was torn,
When you went out with somebody else.
I don't know how to say it,
Whenever I see your outfit,
I love to see your hips,
And your beautiful lips.
I wish you dumped this boy,
To him your just a toy,
But to me your my life,
And I know you love Wildlife.
I hope I see you again,
And not Ben,
I can see your heart's on fire,
I am your admirer.
You know somebody sent that Valentines card,
I sent it and I will be hard,
If you sent your love to me,
I will protect you like a bee.
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A contest entry
- My deepest Feelings of within by Abner.
600 points, ended May 5, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Nice. Good luck in my contest!
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yea truly the meaning is strong..
thanks very much
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the meaning is so strong
good work
good luck in the contes -
Wow. Brilliant.
Another great poem!!
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