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whispers

i tried so hard no to think of you
but the images of the time spent reflect in my eyes
the love that i once had still florishes
the hurt ive caused cant be undone
but truth be told i would erase it if i could
i cant
i have to live with it
im sorry
im sorry
im sorry
the whispered words i say
vanish into the air
disapate
consumed by night
leave my lips
and graze your ears
but not even heard

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  • Swords in Ice
    April 23, 2008
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    Groovy Yoovee

    I like the poems written from the heart, they have more soul and power to them than Thesaurus written master pieces. Whoever this person is, they are extremly lucky to have you, don't let go hun xx

    *Its Neko time! new song (Which won't ever exist lols)*