This is for the girl
who makes the sun shine when she smiles.
My tongue twists
when I try to say the things
that need said.
I can't often find the right words,
but I hope she understands.
Everything I am,
everything I do,
is for her.
I hope that it's enough,
though she deserves so much more.
She looks at me
with those eyes
that hold the whole world,
and graced with this beautiful glance
I am content.
This is for the girl
who I haven't much to give
besides my love.
This is for the girl
who looks at me like I'm something
even though there isn't much to see.
This is for the girl
who means the whole world to me.
Author notes
Sorry if this isn't what you meant... It's about my girlfriend, and it seemed like you meant for it to be a crush... But this is what I've got.
Thanks.
A contest entry
- My deepest Feelings of within by Abner.
600 points, ended May 5, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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naw
*huggles* you are so sweet
i love you so much
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*huggles back* No I'm not. I'm flesh-flavoured. See? *holds out arm*
I love you too. Very very much.
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"This is for the girl
who looks at me like I'm something
even though there isn't much to see.
This is for the girl
who means the whole world to me"
this stanza is the key this contest..
thanks you
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Thank you.
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thats so sweet
that a great poem
i would be suprized if that one won
good luck though
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Uh... Thanks?
I don't expect it will win, either, but I enjoyed writing it, and I meant it.
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