Meet me tonight,
In our dreams, my love.
Where we skip and sing,
the songs of one another.
Nuzzle in each other's arms,
For endless eternities.
Warm, safe and protected,
from the storms of life.
Your eyes telling me,
All I ever needed to hear.
Your hands showing me,
All I ever needed to feel.
Of all the lifetimes,
And all the circumstances,
That keep us apart,
In our dreams we're alive.
Sweet Dreams, my love.
May they delight and encompass you.
Join me in transcending bliss.
Our worlds - finally one.
And in the morning,
When the sun warms your face,
You'll begin to stir.
Just know that I'm there...
For by your side - I'll forever be.
In a list
A contest entry
- ~Sweet Dreams~ by Maybe Anastasia.
300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very touching!
This is great, I love the words you chose to use. You are an awesome poeta!!
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loving and beautiful. well done putting your emtoions in to the poem!
mylee -
Awwww I'm melting!!!
this is so beautiful, sweet and very loving, just so wow, the love, it burns and never will die...
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This is like a dream.
Could anything be this beautiful.
You created a world of serenity and warmth.
The 4th stanza is captivating.
It has a tinge of sadness to it...longing...yet is so comforting and assuring. You are like the new morning,
fresh and new. I am in every song that is close to you, in every flower that is born to the earth, in every smile that warms your heart, i am there to see you through,
In every sunset, i am there.
LIAM
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A deep, beautiful, heartfelt write of how perfect love should be...if only captured in a dream
(line 3-I think were should be we)
line 5-space between each/ others)
graceful and beautiful penning,
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oo. Very nice job! It's nice and smooth! I love the last line. Thanks for the entry.
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Very nice! I don't know much about love and what not, but this is an inspiration, love here I come! =)
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This is really touching. Very sweet. Good write.
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Ahhh *sigh* .. how lovely!! To have a love like that would be a wonderful thing!
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What awesome thoughts and dreams, so well penned
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