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Sensual Sesenta Nueve

Bodies glisten,
glittering with sweat.
Heated passion,
Cream wet.

Hands swirl,
in and around torso.
Tickling sensation,
rhythmic flow.

Tongues tasting,
flickering with pleasure.
Uncontrollable moans,
released treasure.

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  • Beret55 silver member
    May 2, 2008
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    Now that was mmmmmmmmmmmm nice. You got my attention. Very good..


  • Mykeee
    April 29, 2008

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    nice flow to this. steamy on the edges. I see you have a good taste with the erotic, thanks for invite


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    April 29, 2008
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    Excellent!! You've captured the hidden emotions from within...


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 23, 2008

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    wow auntie this is such a sensual and tasty write written with a perfect feeling and imagery in it.well done with this