Like a carefree sprit, gliding through life,
With an endless smile and outspread wings-
Longing for liberation, never standing still,
Constantly thinking their must be more to give-
Never satisfied; needing to stretch my heart further-
To reach the sky.
Some may say I’m obsessional-
As my mind bursts with thoughts, which reflect on a wall-
That has no writing-
or pictures,
emptiness and creativity are my only companions,
In the blanket of life - which is covered with day dreams.
Author notes
This poem aims to express who I am in a creative and unconventional way.
A contest entry
- Autobiography by Randomly Beautiful.
1750 points, ended April 24, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a beautiful peice of writing and I have recieved a very good image of who you are through your words.
"As my mind bursts with thoughts, which reflect of a wall-
That has no writing-
or pictures" I love those lines. Wonderful poem!
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Very well expressed with wonderful insight!
Loved all of it but I think my favorite part is...
"emptiness and creativity are my only companions,
In the blanket of life-which is covered with day dreams"
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I appreciate the time you took to enter. :f
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