To glance at you
Gaze upon such a precious soul
It feels so true
With no acknowledgement I turn to coal
Share words of thought
Beauty of insight
My attention is caught
By your inner light
Enchanting eyes
Tempting smile
Your words are always a surprise
I’ve cared for you for awhile
Your laugh is music, to my ear
Entangled interests of conversation
To lose you, I do fear
To me you’re the most perfect creation
A contest entry
- My deepest Feelings of within by Abner.
600 points, ended May 5, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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simply beautiful. the background was fitting with your poem as well; it helped to create a delicate, whispered tone.
again, it was really beautful. good luck in the contest! this was emotion filled. -
"Share words of thought
Beauty of insight
My attention is caught
By your inner light"
wow i love this stanza.
thanks very much for entering.
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