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Sweet Dreams


Night spells your name,
while i hear your voice
saying good bye, good night,
sleep tight, dream with me tonight.

The moon is my messenger,
my best friend and confident.
She knows my deepest secrets,
she is my portal to you.

I can see your tired face
lying in your pillow,
your eyes slowly closing,
shutting down their sparkling stars.

I send my presence, my soul to your side.
sitting in your bed, watching you sleep
a beautiful sight, that stays in my heart deep.

My hand fixes your messed hair off your face,
my voice sings you a lullaby, my words are your blanket
and my embrace protects your sweet dreams.

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  • Maybe Anastasia
    April 29, 2008
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    This honestly brought tears to my eyes. It's so sweet and tender. Thank you so much for entering.


    • Passionateguitarrist
      April 29, 2008
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      Glad you liked it and sorry for what happened. Dont worry better things will come.

      • Maybe Anastasia
        April 29, 2008
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        Its very beutiful write. Thanks again for entering. Im sure better things will come Its just hard to wait. I will survive though Ima fighter. I just hope he does to. I was his life line pretty much.